Editing Go for a walk (Irem)

{{Action
|Icon = irem_port.png
|ID = 260001
|From Storylet title = The House of Snow and Brine
|Description = You will learn the streets and turns of the city.
|Success title = Snow and roses
|Success description = The city will be vast, a metropolis of stone rising from the zee, surrounded by ice, blanketed in roses. Her streets will meander into curls and tangles, obeying no clear pattern. Closer to the jetty, her streets will be flanked by buildings of granite and marble. But further north, past the seat of the Seven-Serpent where all her streets converge, the city will resemble a silent temple. There you will find stone pillars and grand staircases, rising into the air to no discernible purpose. So close to the northern edge of the city, the smell of roses will be overwhelming; the wind unyielding; the cold dangerous. You will turn back the way you came.}}
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 |Description = You will learn the streets and turns of the city.
 |Success title = Snow and roses
-|Success description = The city will be vast, a metropolis of stone rising from the zee [...] Her streets will meander into curls and tangles [...] But further north, past the [...] Seven-Serpent [...] the city will resemble a silent temple. [...] You will turn back the way you came.}}
+|Success description = The city will be vast, a metropolis of stone rising from the zee, surrounded by ice, blanketed in roses. Her streets will meander into curls and tangles, obeying no clear pattern. Closer to the jetty, her streets will be flanked by buildings of granite and marble. But further north, past the seat of the Seven-Serpent where all her streets converge, the city will resemble a silent temple. There you will find stone pillars and grand staircases, rising into the air to no discernible purpose. So close to the northern edge of the city, the smell of roses will be overwhelming; the wind unyielding; the cold dangerous. You will turn back the way you came.}}
-*{{Item Gain|Memory of Distant Shores|1 x}}
-*{{Item Gain|Sighting of a Parabolan Landmark|1 x}}