Editing Ignore the officiant, for now

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|Description = Perhaps it will ignore you in turn. Regardless, you may be able to learn something about the church.
 
|Description = Perhaps it will ignore you in turn. Regardless, you may be able to learn something about the church.
 
|Success title = A factory-church?
 
|Success title = A factory-church?
|Success description = […]"Excuse me," the officiant protests. The flagstones are hot, here[…] the roar of a furnace deep below. Machinery[…], as if something is being manufactured[…]
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|Success description = […] you can hear the roar of a furnace deep below. Machinery clanks and rumbles, as if something is being manufactured in the crypt.
  
The rows of hulking, furred figures[…] turn to watch you, their eyes like sparks[…]
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The rows of hulking, furred figures in the pews turn to watch you, their eyes like sparks in the dark.
  
"I said 'Excuse me,'"[…]
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