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|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
 
|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
 
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|BroadDiff = 89
|Success description = […] You settle in a charming spot, secluded[…] little treats passed around. These include […] fine-quality prisoner's honey[…]
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|Success description = The young people chatter happily as you wend your way […] little treats passed around. These include drops of a very fine quality prisoner's honey […]
  
In these shared honey-dreams, it is easy to […] enjoy the company – the intimacy[…] You and your companions spend a lovely afternoon together[…]
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[…] You and your companions spend a lovely afternoon together […]
 
|Success summary = You spend a pleasant, honey-filled afternoon with some young people.}}
 
|Success summary = You spend a pleasant, honey-filled afternoon with some young people.}}
  

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