Editing Mock an Insufferable Poseur

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|BroadDiff = 5
 
|BroadDiff = 5
 
|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
 
|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
|Button text = CASTIGATE
 
 
|Success title = A surgical coup
 
|Success title = A surgical coup
 
|Success description = You meet each line of his faultlessly with a cough, an off-colour joke or badly-timed applause. Soon enough he stumbles red-faced from the premises. A grateful crowd rewards you at the bar.}}
 
|Success description = You meet each line of his faultlessly with a cough, an off-colour joke or badly-timed applause. Soon enough he stumbles red-faced from the premises. A grateful crowd rewards you at the bar.}}
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|Rare Success description = 'Could I do any better? [...]'
 
|Rare Success description = 'Could I do any better? [...]'
  
In answer to his challenge, you meet each ghastly line with [...] one of your own. Successive waves of [...] laughter rise around you [...] he slinks away. You'd feel guiltier, but you're busy fielding drinks and flirtatious winks[...]}}
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In answer to his challenge, you meet each ghastly line with [...]. Successive waves of [...] laughter rise around you. No-one even notices [...] as he slinks away. You'd feel guiltier, but [...] in increasing numbers.}}
  
 
*{{Success Increase|Persuasive}}
 
*{{Success Increase|Persuasive}}

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