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{{Action
|Icon = Story.png
|From Card/Storylet title = The Writer's Desk: Finish a Short Story
|ID = 164463
|Description = You'll do better soon. But this is good enough for now.
|Unlocked with = {{Unlock|A Name Signed with a Flourish|3}}, {{Unlock|Manuscript Page|10 x}}
|BroadDiff = 16
|BroadQuality = {{Unlock|Potential}}
|Success title = "A suitable entertainment for a slow evening."
|Success description = You've had better reviews, but then you weren't really working at your best.}}

*{{Item Loss|Manuscript Page|now=0 x}}
*{{Progress Reset|Potential}}
*{{Gain|Short Story|1 x}}
*{{Progress Reset|Working on...}}
*{{Gain|Persuasive|+2 CP}}
*{{Gain|Making Waves|+1 CP}}

{{Failure
|Fail title = "I did eventually summon up enough energy to finish it."
|Fail description = Yes. Not your best, perhaps. You'll do better next time.}}

*{{Item Loss|Manuscript Page|now=0 x}}
*{{Progress Reset|Potential}}
*{{Gain|Unloved Short Story|1 x}}
*{{Progress Reset|Working on...}}
*{{Gain|Persuasive|+1 CP}}