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|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
 
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|Success title = On the dock of the zee
 
|Success title = On the dock of the zee
|Success description = [...] the oily black waters caress the shore. Stevedores trundle[...] Men with axes and hammers attack the black coral. [...] steamers strain towards the tomb-colonies, the Elder Continent, Polythreme. It's far from natural, but it is not without a melancholy charm.}}
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|Success description = Down by the docks, the oily black waters caress the shore. [...] Far out on the Unterzee, steamers strain towards the tomb-colonies, the Elder Country, Polythreme. It's far from natural, but it is not without a melancholy charm.}}
  
 
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|Rare Success title = Into the gardens
 
|Rare Success title = Into the gardens
|Rare Success description = Tyrant's Gardens are hardly the epitome of wild nature. But Neathy fungus is ruthlessly purged[...]. You stroll past the skeletons of privet hedges[...]. The brown lawns. [...] trees like clawed hands. Memories of a different world. Oh, this could be marvellous...}}
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|Rare Success description = Tyrant's Gardens are hardly the epitome of wild nature. [...] You stroll past the skeletons of privet hedges that died at the Fall. The brown lawns. The trees like clawed hands. Memories of a different world. Oh, this could be marvellous...}}
  
 
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