Editing Silence the call of the Monkprince Hills 1

{{Action
|ID = 264366
|Icon = island5.png
|From Storylet title = Troubled Times
|Description = The train line cut through the barrows on the way to the Evenlode. Now those barrows call out for fresh inhabitants.
|Unlocked with = {{Unlock|Route Taken to Evenlode|4-6}}
|NarrowQuality = Zeefaring
|NarrowDiff = 7
|BroadQuality = Persuasive
|BroadDiff = 150
|Success title = Drown the longing with shanties
|Success description = When the air is still and nothing else is happening, the barrows can be heard calling. Come lie here, nestled in earth,[…]
You learned to keep zailors from following sirens[…] a loud chorus, preferably ribald, sung in company, for as long as the urge lasts.
}}
*{{Success Increase|Persuasive}}
*{{Gain|Exploration of a Hinterland City|now=12|message = You have an idea of the battle lines in the city.}}
{{Failure}}
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 You learned to keep zailors from following sirens[…] a loud chorus, preferably ribald, sung in company, for as long as the urge lasts.
 }}
 *{{Success Increase|Persuasive}}
 *{{Gain|Exploration of a Hinterland City|now=12|message = You have an idea of the battle lines in the city.}}
+{{Failure}}
-{{Failure
-|Failure title = Listen, listen
-|Failure description = When the air is still and nothing else is happening, the barrows can be heard calling. Come lie here, nestled in earth,[…]
-Such a longing. You may be able to keep zailors healthy at zee, but you cannot keep the citizens free from this longing.
-}}
-*{{Failure Increase|Persuasive}}
-*{{Gain|The City Waning|+? CP}}
-*{{Gain|Exploration of a Hinterland City|now=12|message = You have an idea of the battle lines in the city.}}
-*{{Gain|Wounds|+? CP}}