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|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
 
|BroadQuality = {{IL|Persuasive}}
 
|Success title = The stories are true
 
|Success title = The stories are true
|Success description = ...she's his daughter. He's just drunk enough to talk about her with a sort of distant, cautious affection, []. "She let me down," he says, []. "I'm not a bad sort, am I? It's just an 'ard business. She used to understand that." []}}
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|Success description = ...she's his daughter. He's just drunk enough to talk about her with a sort of distant, cautious affection, (). "She let me down," he says, (.). "I'm not a bad sort, am I? It's just an 'ard business. She used to understand that." ()}}
  
 
*{{Success Increase|Persuasive}}
 
*{{Success Increase|Persuasive}}
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{{Failure
 
{{Failure
 
|Failure title = A long silence
 
|Failure title = A long silence
|Failure description = He picks up a knife, hefts it; tosses and catches it; and then hurls it across the room. There is an agonised squeak. [] The Cheery Man watches its struggles with professional interest. "She's nothing to me," he says.}}
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|Failure description = He picks up a knife, hefts it; tosses and catches it; and then hurls it across the room. There is an agonised squeak. () The Cheery Man watches its struggles with professional interest. "She's nothing to me," he says.}}
  
 
*{{Failure Increase|Persuasive}}
 
*{{Failure Increase|Persuasive}}
 
*{{Airs|The Airs of London}}
 
*{{Airs|The Airs of London}}
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