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|Unlocked with = {{Unlock|A Fruitless Harvest|2}}
 
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|Success title = Ruined harvest
 
|Success title = Ruined harvest
|Success description = The fishing boats have not even been properly docked {{...}}
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|Success description = The fishing boats have not even been properly docked – just drawn up the beach and left a-jumble, listing into each other like hovels in a high wind. Scraps of something desiccated and unrecognisable moulder in the nets; dead coral, or half-starved minnows, or splinters of zee-bleached driftwood.
  
The shore itself is eerily quiet. Even the whispered laughter of water on sand is muted{{...}} Facing eastwards, away from the lights of London, the Unterzee looks grey and dead.
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The shore itself is eerily quiet. Even the whispered laughter of water on sand is muted, hissing like oxygen through a hull breach. Facing eastwards, away from the lights of London, the Unterzee looks grey and dead.
 
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*{{Gain|A Fruitless Harvest|1|message=All is not as it should be on Mutton Island.}}
 
*{{Gain|A Fruitless Harvest|1|message=All is not as it should be on Mutton Island.}}
 
{{Redirect|Fisherman, Returning}}
 
{{Redirect|Fisherman, Returning}}

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