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|Success description = Those fools at the Navy know nothing! Your bold new route shaves days off the journey. And not a whisper of trouble in the waves. The crew is jolly enough to sing an eye-opening song about a hairy octopus.}}
 
|Success description = Those fools at the Navy know nothing! Your bold new route shaves days off the journey. And not a whisper of trouble in the waves. The crew is jolly enough to sing an eye-opening song about a hairy octopus.}}
  
*{{Gain|Approaching Journey's End|+10 CP}}
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*{{Increase|Approaching Journey's End|+10 CP}}
*{{Gain|Troubled Waters|+9 CP}}
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*{{Increase|Troubled Waters|+9 CP}}
  
 
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|Failure description = The Unterzee is an unmoving black mirror. The smoke from your funnels rises vertically into the darkness. The zailors are silent. They will not look at you. Pinpricks of light in the cavern roof paint the ocean an eery blue. What is coming? }}
 
|Failure description = The Unterzee is an unmoving black mirror. The smoke from your funnels rises vertically into the darkness. The zailors are silent. They will not look at you. Pinpricks of light in the cavern roof paint the ocean an eery blue. What is coming? }}
  
*{{Gain|Approaching Journey's End|+7 CP}}
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*{{Increase|Approaching Journey's End|+7 CP}}
*{{Gain|Troubled Waters|+18 CP}}
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*{{Increase|Troubled Waters|+18 CP}}

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