The Writer's Desk: rework!

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Murder your darlings. Editing will cost you Manuscript Pages, but may improve the Potential of the work. You can use Romantic Notions, Tale of Terror!! and other items for research and inspiration: experiment and see what works!

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Finish your Short Story
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A Cautious Edit
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    Broad, 25 || 18 - very chancy (43%) || 22 - chancy (52%) || 26 - modest (62%) || 30 - very modest (72%) || 34 - low-risk (81%) || 38 - straightforward (91%) || 42 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    Omit needless words

    Rare Success

    The fortunate fall of a phrase

    Failure

    Little improvement

    ^
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A Daring Edit
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    Broad, 50 || 35 - very chancy (42%) || 43 - chancy (51%) || 51 - modest (61%) || 60 - very modest (72%) || 68 - low-risk (81%) || 76 - straightforward (91%) || 84 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A raid on the fortress!

    Failure

    Shorter, but not better

    ^
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Incorporate romance
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    Broad, 60 || 41 - very chancy (41%) || 51 - chancy (51%) || 61 - modest (61%) || 71 - very modest (71%) || 81 - low-risk (81%) || 91 - straightforward (91%) || 100 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    Hearts may flutter

    Failure

    A little sickly

    ^
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Spice it with gossip
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    Broad, 60 || 41 - very chancy (41%) || 51 - chancy (51%) || 61 - modest (61%) || 71 - very modest (71%) || 81 - low-risk (81%) || 91 - straightforward (91%) || 100 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A significant titillation

    Failure

    Hollow nonsense

    ^
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Compromising Document
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    Broad, 70 || 48 - very chancy (41%) || 60 - chancy (51%) || 72 - modest (61%) || 83 - very modest (71%) || 95 - low-risk (81%) || 107 - straightforward (91%) || 117 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A thrill of recognition

    Failure

    Dispose of it quickly

    ^
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Add a touch of darkness
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    Broad, 70 || 48 - very chancy (41%) || 60 - chancy (51%) || 72 - modest (61%) || 83 - very modest (71%) || 95 - low-risk (81%) || 107 - straightforward (91%) || 117 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A thrill and a chill

    Failure

    A story for which the world is not yet prepared

    ^
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Incorporate life-lessons
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    Success

    Another fight scene?

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Include something exotic
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    Broad, 80 || 55 - very chancy (41%) || 68 - chancy (51%) || 82 - modest (61%) || 95 - very modest (71%) || 108 - low-risk (81%) || 122 - straightforward (91%) || 134 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    Throngs and dominions

    Failure

    Implausibility upon implausibility

    ^
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Add a dash of zee-adventure!
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    Broad, 90 || 62 - very chancy (41%) || 77 - chancy (51%) || 92 - modest (61%) || 107 - very modest (71%) || 122 - low-risk (81%) || 137 - straightforward (91%) || 150 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    Blood, salt and iron

    Failure

    All rather nautical

    ^
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Weave in esoteric elements
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    Broad, 100 || 69 - very chancy (41%) || 85 - chancy (51%) || 102 - modest (61%) || 119 - very modest (71%) || 135 - low-risk (81%) || 152 - straightforward (91%) || 167 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    The seventh labyrinth

    Failure

    A sudden awakening

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Add a dash of heartbreak
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    Broad, 110 || 76 - very chancy (41%) || 94 - chancy (51%) || 112 - modest (61%) || 131 - very modest (71%) || 149 - low-risk (81%) || 167 - straightforward (91%) || 184 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    Lost content

    Failure

    Not on the page

    ^
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Not an entirely fictional character...
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    Broad, 110 || 76 - very chancy (41%) || 94 - chancy (51%) || 112 - modest (61%) || 131 - very modest (71%) || 149 - low-risk (81%) || 167 - straightforward (91%) || 184 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A suitable guise

    Failure

    Mme F_______

    ^
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Ask your most exalted contacts for inside information
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    Broad, 140 || 96 - very chancy (41%) || 119 - chancy (51%) || 143 - modest (61%) || 166 - very modest (71%) || 189 - low-risk (81%) || 213 - straightforward (91%) || 234 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A crimson-skied revel

    Failure

    Not all that is secret is interesting

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Publish... and be damned.
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    Broad, 150 || 103 - very chancy (41%) || 128 - chancy (51%) || 153 - modest (61%) || 178 - very modest (71%) || 203 - low-risk (81%) || 228 - straightforward (91%) || 250 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    A dangerous strategy

    Alternative Success

    A dangerous strategy

    Failure

    A visit from the Ministry

    ^
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Use your Case Notes
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    Broad, 60 || 41 - very chancy (41%) || 51 - chancy (51%) || 61 - modest (61%) || 71 - very modest (71%) || 81 - low-risk (81%) || 91 - straightforward (91%) || 100 - straightforward (100%)

    Success

    Names, dates, places

    Failure

    Too good to be true

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A rare lesson
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    Success

    True facts

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Back to writing...

Summary

The Writer's Desk: rework!
Option Item Cost Gain[1] Limit[2]
Quillsmall.png A Cautious Edit 1 (4) 25 (45)
Knife2small.png A Daring Edit 2 60
Heartsmall.png Incorporate romance 0.10 2 60
Gossipsmall.png Spice it with gossip 0.50 2 60
Jigsawsmall.png Use your Case Notes 2
Scaryeyesmall.png Add a touch of darkness 0.50 2 70
Papers3small.png Compromising Document 0.50 2 70
Wakesmall.png Include something exotic 0.50 2 80
Blackjacksmall.png Incorporate life-lessons 3 80
Waves3small.png Add a dash of zee-adventure! 0.50 2 90
Implicationsmall.png Weave in esoteric elements 2.50 5 100
Adorationsmall.png Add a dash of heartbreak 2.50 5 110
Masksatinsmall.png Not an entirely fictional character... 2.50 5 110
Baldmansmall.png Ask your most exalted contacts for inside information 12.50 12 140
Newgatesmall.png Publish... and be damned. 12.50 12 150
Papers4small.png A rare lesson 60 25
  1. Rare occasions in brackets.
  2. This is not only the potential cap, but also the difficulty level for this Persuasive challenge, which means a 60% success rate if it equals your quality.